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Post Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:51 pm

"angeli"

"angeli"

  • Principal Authors: Zion Morviael
  • Who can post on this thread: Zion Morviael
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Location: Talus, Alderaan and Coruscant (Jedi Temple)
Summary of Work: Part 3 of Zion's History
Continued from Part 2: "demoni"
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Post Thu Jan 05, 2012 12:35 am

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*It was almost 268 years after Alderaan before any great threat appeared to my family. Sure there was many great adventures in that time, but none so great as this final threat. I could not help but notice that history was repeating itself, for Talus was quickly becoming much like Alderaan. And although I could not see them, the storm clouds were at last drawing to a head*

*It was another bright sunny day on Talus. Zion, Hikari and Akari were enjoying their day at the carnival which had come back to town. Although they were all some 200 years old, they still looked like they were all aged between 25-35. They still, tho, enjoyed the simple pleasures that life offered, often taking them for granted when they weren't off travelling the galaxy.

Back at Jarrah's estate, Dario was busy cooking a massive lunch for everyone. Dario looked out the window as Marco and Jack were sparring in the garden with fake swords, while Jarrah was acting as judge and mentor. Jarrah had taken in Zion, Hikari, Akari and Dario close to 240 years ago, although they had gone off travelling many times since then, with their last adventure seeing Zion return in a stasis due to some pretty bad injuries.

Zion, Hikari and Akari sat down on a bench, relaxing in the sun as they enjoyed their ice creams which Zion had paid for. Zion smiled at them*

=Zion Morviael=
It's good to spend time relaxing here...

=Hikari Morviael=
I don't understand how you can possibly relax in all that gear?!

*Akari chuckled as Zion looked down at his robes, which Paul had made for him, before turning back to Hikari*
=Zion Morviael=
This gear has saved our lives on many occasions, besides after 200 years of wearing it, it's grown rather comfortable.

*Hikari let out a sigh as she shrugged*
=Hikari Morviael=
If it hasn't grown comfortable by then, then you would have been in trouble.

*They all laughed at Hikari's comment. Akari then turned to Zion*
=Akari Morviael=
Thank you for the ice cream big brother.

=Zion Morviael=
No worries Akari. So who is up for another ride before heading home?

=Akari Morviael=
Me!

=Hikari Morviael=
I suppose so...

*Zion smiled as they all stood up and went off towards the biggest roller coaster the carnival had, every time they visited the carnival they went on it. This year though, the roller coaster has some new upgrades which Zion had heard a lot about, but had kept secret from his two younger sisters*
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Post Thu Jan 05, 2012 10:53 pm

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*Zion, Hikari and Akari stumbled out of the roller coaster exit, Hikari pointing her finger shakily at Zion*
=Hikari Morviael=
You little sneak!

*Zion laughed at Hikari's slight anger*
=Zion Morviael=
It was fun though, no?

=Akari Morviael=
That was awesome!

*Hikari shook her head. Zion stood up straight*
=Zion Morviael=
I think it's time to head home.

*Hikari and Akari nodded as Zion lead them through the carnival grounds and out onto the streets. It was turning out to be a great day, yet again, as they navigated the streets back towards Jarrah's estate.

Dario was finishing up the cooking while Marco and Jack finished up their practice, when the doorbell rank. Jarrah went walked through the house towards the door*

=Jarrah Morviael=
I'll get that.

*Jarrah arrived to the door and opened it*
=Jarrah Morviael=
Might I help you?

*The 4 men looked Jarrah over, before smiling*
=Uriel=
Yes, you can. You are Jarrah yes?

=Jarrah Morviael=
Yes that is me, who might you gentlemen be?

=Uriel=
My name is Uriel, this is Azrael, Sachiel and Zadakiel. Now where is Zion Morviael?!

*Jarrah's eyes suddenly widened, he turned to yell out, but Uriel stabbed him with a knife before Jarrah could do much. Uriel motioned to the others*
=Uriel=
We have our orders!

*Azrael, Sachiel and Zadakiel slipped in through the front door, searching through the house. Sachiel and Zadakiel heard Marco and Jack coming in through the back door and rushed to them. Marco and Jack let out a startled cry before Sachiel and Zadakiel stabbed them. Dario leaned out of the archway from the kitchen and say Jarrah slumped on the floor by the door. Uriel looked up at Dario*
=Uriel=
Azrael, get him!

*Dario pulled back into the kitchen rushing for a weapon, meanwhile using the training Zion had given him to search out Zion's mind.

Zion stopped mid step as suddenly he felt Dario's presence. Dario sent out the mental of Jarrah and the man standing over him*

=Dario=
<< They found us! >>

*Zion's eyes widened. Akari turned to look at Zion*
=Akari Morviael=
What's wrong big brother?

=Zion Morviael=
We have to hide!

*Hikari and Akari felt slightly confused as Zion grabbed them both and guided them towards a hiding spot.

Dario grabbed a large cleaving knife as Azrael came into the kitchen. The two faced each other, ready to fight*

=Dario=
You won't get me!

=Azrael=
I don't plan to!

*Dario and Azrael ran at each other, brandishing their weapons. the pair parried each other's first strike, spinning around each other like expert swordsman. Azrael smiled*
=Azrael=
Nice. But let's see what you do now!

*Azrael force pushed Dario, taking him by surprise, Azrael then rushed forward, stabbing Dario in the chest.

Zion, Hikari and Akari stopped underneath a bridge that would hide the girls well enough*

=Zion Morviael=
Stay here! I am going to go help Dario!

*Hikari and Akari suddenly realised what had happened. Akari hugged Zion tightly*
=Akari Morviael=
Come back soon big brother!

=Zion Morviael=
I promise I will come back for you, both of you!

*Akari let go of Zion, Hikari paused for a moment then hugged Zion*
=Hikari Morviael=
Don't let them separate us again!

=Zion Morviael=
I won't!

*Hikari let go of Zion, who then turned towards Jarrah's estate and took off. Hikari and Akari moved into the shadow's, sitting down.
Zion rushed past people walking along the side walk, being careful not to push them over. Zion then vaulted over a railing, taking a short cut, making his trip slightly shorter. Zion was not about to lose Dario, not after all they had been through as mates. Zion used force speed to help make the trip shorter*
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Post Fri Jan 06, 2012 4:28 pm

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*Zion jumped over a small gap as he headed towards his uncle's estate, where just moments before his uncle, cousins and best mate had been attacked. Zion hoped that with any luck he'd make it back in time to provide some help, but then again he had never really been that luck.
Zon made his way up the driveway of the estate, rushing like mad towards the front door which was wide open. Zion could see his uncle's body on the floor just inside the doorway. Zion extended his hidden blade and hook blade as he passed through the doorway, leaping over his uncle's body.
Zion heard noise coming from the kitchen and ran towards the archway leading into it. As he appeared in the doorway, Azrael turned around and faced him, knife at the ready. Zion saw Dario's body laying on the floor*

=Zion Morviael=
Will you never leave us be?!

=Azrael=
Not so long as you live!

=Zion Morviael=
So be it!

*Zion rushed forward with the force, Azrael brought his knife up to stab, but Zion side stepped him, using his hook blade to pull Azrael forward, before stabbing the hidden blade into Azrael's neck. Zion then withdrew the hidden blade and retracted it and the hook blade back into their vambraces.
Zion then turned around as 3 men ran past the archway towards the front door. Zion rushed to the archway, watching them escape for a moment, before his eyes narrowed*

=Zion Morviael=
No you don't!

*Zion ran up the hallway, leaping over his uncle's body out of the doorway, Zion quickly used the force to pull the door shut. Zion chased after the three men who were staying close together as they escaped.
Zion kept in pursuit of them even as they headed towards town, he was not about to let them get away or hurt anyone else. Uriel, Sachiel and Zadakiel ran full pelt up the street and into town, hoping to lose Zion among the many people there. They thought they had some luck as they pushed their way into a massive market set up.
Zion paused at the edge of the market crowd, knowing it would take him too much effort to push through that many people. Zion then ran up the side of one of the stalls and then chased the three men from the rooftops.
Zion then closed in on the rear two men as he pulled out two of his throwing knifes. Zion then jumped from the rooftop, aiming the blades towards the two men as he landed on their backs, with the blades piercing them. Uriel and Sachiel full forward as they felt Zion's body collide into their backs and then the blades pierce them.
The crowd around Zion parted, forming a clearing as they realised what was going on. Zion pulled the blades out of the two men's backs before stabbing them into Uriel and Sachiel's necks, ending their lives. Zion stood up and put the throwing knifes back into their places and jumped back up onto the roof tops to chase after Zadakiel who had made good use of the distraction and gotten through the crowd and was disappearing off into the side streets.
Zion glared with anger before chasing after him, his only thoughts were on getting vengeance against these murderers. As he gave chase brief thoughts came back of Alderaan, all those many years ago, but they quickly disappeared as Zion kept after Zadakiel*
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Post Fri Jan 06, 2012 4:48 pm

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*Zion leapt off the market rooftops and followed Zadakiel down the side street, where he found the man cornered in a dead end. Zion laughed as he approached, extending his hidden blade and hook blade*
=Zion Morviael=
Your cornered, little mouse!

*Zadakiel turned around and faced Zion, brandishing his knife, ready to fight*
=Zadakiel=
Things are not always as they seem, Zion!

*Zadakiel moved forward, towards Zion. Zion shook his head, using the force to speed up his movements, parrying Zadakiel's blade with his own hook blade, before stabbing Zadakiel with the hidden blade. Zion withdrew the hidden blade as Zadakiel fell to his knees, laughing*
=Zion Morviael=
What do you find so funny?!

=Zadakiel=
Do you not think it odd?

=Zion Morviael=
Speak plainly, or do not speak at all!

=Zadakiel=
Poor Zion! We were merely a distraction! A way of attracting your attention from your sisters! As we speak, others have found Hikari and Akari and are making off with them!

*Zion's eyes widened as his expression changed and he fully realised what was going on, he had been played. Zadakiel kept laughing*
=Zadakiel=
There is nothing you can do! Michael and Raphael will be long gone!

*Zion pulled out his lightsaber, igniting the silver blade, before roaring with anger and cutting Zadakiel's head off*
=Zion Morviael=
We will see how true your words are!

*Zion turned the saber off and place it back on his belt before rushing back off towards where he had left Hikari and Akari. He had once again found himself facing the same situation as on Alderaan, a fact he hated. His enemies knew how he would react, playing him like a puppet... For all his years of experience, he was still making rookie mistakes.
Zion cross the bridge and jumped off it down to the spot where the girls had been hiding. Zion looked around, even going so far as to reach out with the force to look for them, but he could not find them anywhere nearby.
Zion cursed to himself as he hit a pillar. He had failed them again, but he swore that he would find them and he would bring them home safe. He just had to find Michael and Raphael, who ever they were*
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Post Sat Jan 07, 2012 12:39 am

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*It had taken Zion a little over a week to track down Michael and Raphael. It had taken him some extra effort due to the fact that it was only him trying to track them down and he had swept over the crime scene several times without success, until just the other day when he had found an item that had been Michael's. From it, Zion had managed to work out where the pair had taken Hikari and Akari.
Zion waited until the coast was clear before cross the street out the front of the building his sisters were being held in. It was a house that looked like any other. But Zion knew that his enemies had used places like this before to hide in plain sight. These were the enemies that were most dangerous.
Zion approached the front door, opening it quietly to not alert those inside. Zion crept down the entrance hallway towards the lounge room where he thought he could hear some noise. The darkness of the house helped keep Zion hidden as he slowly poked his head around the corner and looked into the lounge room. Two men were sitting on the couch facing a holo screen which was playing the news.
Zion pulled back, calming his breathing as he stood there and planned his next move. Zion withdrew two of his throwing knifes, then spun around, standing in the middle of the doorway into the lounge he threw the knifes at the back of the heads. The blades sunk in and the heads fell forward. Zion felt pleased, until suddenly the lights all flashed on and a blaster bolt just missed his cheek. Zion pulled back behind the wall to take cover as a voice rang forth*

=Michael=
Did you really think we wouldn't be expecting you Zion!

*Zion cursed to himself, It had all been too easy. However he was not about to become the hunted. Zion withdrew his lightsaber and ignited the silver blade, holding it in a guard stance as he turned back around the corner and ran across the lounge room towards Michael with his blaster, who shot off another couple blasts. Zion deflected both bolts off to the side before dragging the blade behind him through the air.
Michael threw the blaster down and fumbled for his sword, but was too late as Zion extended his hidden blade and rammed it up underneath Michael's jaw and into his skull, the phrik blade making short work of the bone in it's way. Zion then withdrew the blade and retracted it back into the vambrace as he turned around, searching for Raphael.
Zion moved out of the lounge room and took the stair case to the second level of the house, when he heard the noise of a window opening. Zion ran down the hallway, appearing in the bedroom door just as Raphael jumped out of the window. Zion extinguished his blade before placing the hilt on his belt and running over to the window, vaulting through it and rolling onto the small front lawn.
Zion turned to the right as Raphael made his way down the street, trying to escape. Zion chased after him, determined to not let Raphael get away and to learn the location of his sisters. Raphael leapt over a barrel, which slowed him down and allowed Zion enough of a chance to close the gap. Zion jumped through the air, tackling Raphael to the ground. Raphael grunted as he hit the ground and the wind was knocked out of him before Zion turned him over, scuffing him by the collar*

=Zion Morviael=
Where are my sisters?!

=Raphael=
I don't have to answer to you!

*Raphael looked to the side, uninterested. Zion pushed Raphael back, causing his head to hit against the hard ground. Zion brought Raphael's face closer*
=Zion Morviael=
Tell me where they are! Else I might not be so kind as to end your life quickly! I wonder how long you would last should you be tortured!

=Raphael=
Try me!

*Zion shook his head as he left go with his left hand, drawing his arm back as he extended the hidden blade, pointing it towards Raphael's thigh. Zion waited to see if Raphael would say a thing, but he remained mute, so Zion stabbed the blade down in Raphael leg. Raphael screamed out in pain as the blade pierced the skin, muscle and then bone. Zion left the blade impaled in Raphael's leg*
=Zion Morviael=
Ready to talk?!

=Raphael=
Never! My master would never expect me to give in....

*Raphael groaned as Zion twisted the blade in his leg, exacerbating the pain*
=Zion Morviael=
I'm pretty sure your master is just using you as a pawn! Why is it that he is not here, dealing with this himself?! He sends others in his stead to take the bullet for him, hiding behind his underlings like a scared child!

=Raphael=
My master is no such thing...

=Zion Morviael=
Don't kid yourself! Your master sent you after girls who could not defend themselves!

*Raphael, hung his head forward, slightly ashamed of himself. Zion pulled the blade out of his leg, retracting it back into it's vambrace*
=Zion Morviael=
Tell me where they are, you may yet be able to save yourself.

=Raphael=
They are with Gabriel, he is planning to publicly execute them in 3 days time...

*Zion cursed under his breath, before extending the hidden blade and quickly stabbing Raphael, killing the man.
Zion stood up as the blade retracted into it's vambrace. They never made it easy for him. It meant Zion only had 3 days to locate Gabriel or to plan how his going to stop the execution. Zion ran off into the night, away from Raphael's body, contemplating his next move. His sisters lives were in danger and he was going to try everything he could to get them out of danger*
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Post Mon Jan 09, 2012 6:40 pm

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*Zion slowly made his way through the large crowd that had gathered before the massive wooden platform that had been erected over the last 3 days. Zion had observed the construction, as well as the constant guarding of it. Through his observation, he had learnt that Gabriel was some sort of high ranking official who had earned certain rights to publicly execute certain criminals.
Zion stopped in the crowd as he got a good view of the platform. Hikari and Akari were shackled on their knees, while Gabriel stood tall between them, looking out at the crowd. Gabriel then pulled out a scroll as he gained everyone's attention and began reading from it*

=Gabriel=
It is on this day, that I, High Lord Gabriel, bring to justice two criminals! They are charged with murder, thievery and treason! For these crimes, their punishment is death!

*The crowd around Zion cheered, as they were getting excited. Zion was begging to run out of time to save his sisters. Gabriel rolled the scroll up and handed it to a guard, before producing two daggers as he moved closer to the two girls*
=Gabriel=
It is with these daggers, that I graciously purge you of your sins, so that you might enter the after life in some peace!

*Zion's eyes widened. He had not expected to let things get this far, but the crowd was hindering his efforts. Zion then started pushing his way forward, knocking people out of the way as he tried to rush toward the platform. Gabriel saw Zion's movements from the edge of his vision, before smiling as he brought the daggers down upon Hikari and Akari, embedding the daggers in the girls backs.
Zion stopped in his place, feeling like he had been hit by a train. In that single instant, all that had been left of Zion's family had just been taken away from him by the strike of Gabriel*

=Zion Morviael=
No!

*Zion pushed forward again before using the force to push off and leap through the air onto the platform. Zion extended his hook blade and used it to throw the closest soldier off the platform into the crowd, before extending his hidden blade. Gabriel unsheathed his sword, motioning for the soldiers to stand down*
=Gabriel=
Ah, the third criminal has seen fit to join us! You may have killed those before me, but do not think I will be so easy. My master favoured me above others!

=Zion Morviael=
Then your master was a fool!

*Zion rushed toward Gabriel, who lashed out at Zion with his sword. Zion parried with his hook blade, as he pulled himself in closer. Gabriel slid his sword out of the hook blade and parried Zion's stab with the hidden blade. Zion jumped back to avoid Gabriel's follow up slice at his chest. Zion retracted the hook blade before quickly pulling out a throwing knife and throwing it at Gabriel. As Gabriel blocked the flying knife, Zion side stepped Gabriel and thrust the hidden blade into Gabriel's side.
Zion pulled the blade out of Gabriel, who fell to the ground, coughing. Zion turned towards Hikari and Akari, walking over to the bodies before falling to his knees behind them, hanging his head. He could feel their life force was extremely weak and there was nothing he could do to save them. He had failed his father and the promise he had made to protect his sisters.
Gabriel laughed as Zion knelt by his sisters bodies*

=Gabriel=
You stupid! little! boy! Your sisters are gone! Soon my master will do away with you! There is no where you can hide that will be safe!

*Zion reached out and grasped the two daggers, before pulling them free of Hikari and Akari's bodies. Zion stood up and faced Gabriel, weighting the daggers in his hands*
=Zion Morviael=
You would be a fool to think I will run! No! I will hunt your master down! He will pay for what has been done!

=Gabriel=
You really think you can match my master?! Fool!

*Zion walked closer to Gabriel, unopposed as the crowd and soldiers watched on, dumb founded. Zion knelt on one knee before Gabriel who was on both knee's, clutching his side*
=Zion Morviael=
I don't think, I know I can match your master.

=Gabriel=
Yahweh will not lose to a weakling life yourself!

=Zion Morviael=
We shall see!

*Zion thrust the two daggers into Gabriel's chest. Zion stood up, looking around at the soldiers, daring them to attack*
=Zion Morviael=
My grudge does not belong with you, so do not make it so.

*Zion pulled out his lightsaber, igniting the silver blade as he walked over to Hikari and Akari. He then cut the chains that had bind them, before extinguishing the blade and placing their bodies over his shoulders. Zion then jumped off the platform, propelling himself high into the air with the force.
Zion landed in the streets where he had placed a land speeder. Zion placed Hikari and Akari in the back seat before jumping into the front seat and speeding off. He was not going to leave his sisters here. They deserved a proper burial before he headed off on his quest to track down Yahweh and end all of this madness once and for all*
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Post Mon Jan 09, 2012 10:19 pm

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*Zion stood on a hill top in front of 12 head stones, with 6 of them with fresh dirt piles. After running from the platform, Zion had transported his family and friend back here to Alderaan, where no one was left who remembered the tragedy of over 290 years ago. He had done everything himself, from digging the holes to making the caskets.
Zion bowed his head in the evening sun, it was a beautiful sight to behold. Zion prayed that his family and friends would find peace and happiness in the after life.
A light breeze rustled the leaves of the great tree that stood just behind all the head stones. Zion looked up, admiring the tree's beauty. Zion then turned around and walked down the side of the hill. He now had to track down the man named Yahweh and once and for all finish it all. The YT-1300 light freighter stood waiting at the bottom of the hill for him, ready to take Zion where ever he wanted to go*
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Post Tue Jan 10, 2012 4:27 am

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*Zion stood out the front of the remains of an old Jedi Temple. It had taken Zion 12 months to finally track Yahweh here; the pursuit had taken him across several planets, before finally arriving on Coruscant.
Zion himself had changed much in the last year, his hair and beard having gained some grey streaks through his black hair. His face had also become more well defined. A side effect of his great sense of loss and pain which had caused his usual 35 year old look to take on a slightly more mature look.
Zion pushed the two doors open, the doors grating on their hinges from years of abandonment. Zion walked through the main entrance hall of the temple and out to a large open roofed training field, which Zion suspected had once been enclosed. He looked around and found Yahweh sitting at the top of the far stand of seating. Yahweh examined Zion from a far*

=Yahweh=
So we meet at last, Zion, son of Sam and Louisse Morviael. I must say, looking at you, I would be hard pressed to imagine you defeated my disciples and took apart that group of criminals on Alderaan.

=Zion Morviael=
Looks can be deceiving, a fact which many before you have learned too late.

=Yahweh=
Yes, I am sure that would be the case. You are a lot like your father, to be sure. But I would imagine you are like your mother as well.

=Zion Morviael=
So you knew my parents?

=Yahweh=
Indeed, but that is a story for another time. I would imagine you are here to fight me…

=Zion Morviael=
Exactly! I shall have my revenge for the pain you have caused me and for the deaths of my family and friend!

=Yahweh=
Strong words coming from you boy! Neither your father nor Steve could beat me, what makes you confident you can?!

=Zion Morviael=
My father and Steve fought you?

*Yahweh could sense Zion’s confusion as he force jumped off the seating bank and landed on the field opposite Zion*
=Yahweh=
Yes, many a year ago. It doesn’t surprise me they didn’t tell you. But once again, a story for another time.

*Yahweh pulled out his lightsaber and ignited the darkish blue blade. Zion stared at Yahweh and pulled out his own lightsaber as he ignited the silver blade*
=Zion Morviael=
Let us fight!

=Yahweh=
Let’s make it interesting, no armour and no extra weapons!

=Zion Morviael=
Very well then!

*Yahweh took off his robes and threw it onto the steps of the seating bank. Zion meanwhile removed his armour, robes and weapons. Placing them in a pile near the entrance he came in through, before facing Yahweh again. Zion looked down at the jaggered scar that ran down the length of his entire left arm, wrapping around it. His right arm bore a cut across the outside of his upper arm. While across his back was a straight line scar. Meanwhile a twin scar line came from his right shoulder down across his right pectoris muscle. While a short twin scar line ran over the back of his left shoulder blade. He also still bore a scar across the right side of his mouth. All had been marks from battles and adventures in ages past. Each one had a story which Zion could remember as clear as day.
Yahweh studied Zion’s scars, rather impressed with them all. Yahweh’s body was almost spotless, but he too had been in many a battle, like Zion*

=Yahweh=
I see you have ventured into battle without armour before!

*Zion smiled at the compliment. Zion then spun his lightsaber around, getting ready for combat. Yahweh did the same as Zion as they began to circle each other. Zion moved first, followed by Yahweh. They closed in on each other before parrying each other’s strike. They jumped back from each other, before Zion spun around, striking at Yahweh’s side, which Yahweh blocked, before pushing the blade away and swinging his saber to slash at Zion’s chest. Zion leapt back before ducking down and slicing at Yahweh’s legs. Yahweh leapt backwards and then used a force push on Zion. Zion moved backward with the force push, using its momentum to help him stand up, twirling his saber again before taking up the Soresu stance. Yahweh smiled as he took up the Ataru stance*
=Yahweh=
I see your skills in libero corsa are coming in handy for you…

=Zion Morviael=
There isn’t much you don’t know about me, is there Yahweh?

=Yahweh=
I like to keep track of targets of note, we Jedi have done it for thousands of years!

=Zion Morviael=
You are a fool to think you are still a Jedi! What sort of Jedi orders assassinations on innocent civilians and harmless girls?!

=Yahweh=
I have upheld the light side of the force far longer then you could believe boy! None who died were harmless or innocent!

=Zion Morviael=
Then you are no different to those on Alderaan! Believing your views and goals to be right and justified!

=Yahweh=
Never compare me to such filth!

*Yahweh charged forward, bringing his saber out to strike at Zion’s left side. Zion stepped forward and parried, swing his blade up from underneath, pushing Yahweh’s blade up into the air, before slicing down across Yahweh’s chest. Yahweh jumped back as he clutched at his chest, the scratch burning. Zion brought his blade diagonally across his chest in a defensive position. Yahweh then performed the Makashi salute. They then charged at each other, before parrying several of each other’s strikes, their blades blurs of movement as they clashed in the air. Zion and Yahweh separated, catching their breath*
=Yahweh=
You would have made a fine ally.

=Zion Morviael=
I doubt it! I am not as twisted as you! Now let us end this!

*Zion and Yahweh then charged at each other, blades drawn back. They then both used force speed as they drew close and made a strike at one another. They then slid to a stop opposite their starting positions, holding their blades out in front of themselves.
A couple tense minutes passed before Yahweh let out a groan and feel forward. Zion stood up, deactivating his saber and placing it on his belt before walking over to Yahweh. Yahweh rolled over onto his back as Zion knelt next to him*

=Zion Morviael=
You fought well, old man. Now you may at last escape the evil.

=Yahweh=
Where did it all go so wrong?

*Yahweh then looked into Zions face and more so his eyes. Zion could see Yahweh remembering something*
=Yahweh=
You have your mother’s eyes and her kindness. Only she would be able to forgive me after all that I did. It was my feelings for her and jealousy of your father that lead me astray. I loved your mother almost as much as Sam did, but she chose him. A right decision on her half in retrospect.

=Zion Morviael=
Your jealousy turned to anger and corrupted you, didn’t it? You wanted revenge on my father. But in doing so, you would have killed the memory of my mother.

=Yahweh=
Aye. My mind became twisted and I thought I was doing the right thing. Now I am free of such a curse. Hopefully I will be forgiven in the afterlife for my mistakes…

=Zion Morviael=
You will just have to go and see.

=Yahweh=
I am sorry for all the pain and loss I have caused you… It is a terrible toll that I cast on you… No one should have their family ripped from before their eyes like you…

=Zion Morviael=
Perhaps not… But what happened, happened. Now pass on Yahweh and be joined again with your relatives.

*Yahweh released a final breath as Zion closed his eyes, saying a quick prayer for Yahweh’s safe passage into the afterlife. Zion then stood up and went over and put his gear back on. Zion then pulled some wood together around Yahweh’s body before setting it on fire, burning Yahweh’s body, as was the Jedi way.
Zion then walked out of the temple; whereupon he got onto the speeder bike he borrowed and headed back to the city. It was all over at long last. Now Zion had to decide what he was going to do, for at long last he was no longer being pursued. Zion knew that there was plenty of time to decide what he would do as he rode off away from the temple, for there was still places to explore, people to meet and items to gather*


*…It had been a long road, but I had finally gained my freedom. But it had come at the cost of those I loved and cared for. I could no longer look upon the faces of my sisters as they fussed over my latest injury, nor could I recount adventures with Dario, nor spar with Ryo and Steve, nor could I invent anything new with Paul. But the greatest loss was that of my parents, who’s pride in my growing up I would never know.
But in my quest for my freedom, I sometimes wonder, did I have anymore right to live then those I killed? Was my right to live any greater than that of those who died? Even though their intentions were wrong, should I perhaps have tried to save them? Or was their only chance of salvation through death?
They are thoughts I do not dwell on. For I must live my life to its fullest and try make myself worthy of those whose lives were sacrificed.*

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